Jason Edmunds
May 13, 2022

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A lovely poem Sabrina full of great imagery and internal rhyme.

The message in the poem is awesome. It does hurt to lose someone you love. But, if it is not the right match is better so to spare more pain later on in life.

The line " I have flourished, and let down my wall" resonated with me. It describes perfect harmony and trust between two souls.

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Jason Edmunds
Jason Edmunds

Written by Jason Edmunds

I enjoy socializing, reading, writing, and walking.

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